Steel Bones Against a Burning Sky

Steel Bones Against a Burning Sky

Those industrial towers look like skeletal remains against the orange glow of the river. I was struck by how the water acted like a mirror, doubling t…

Those industrial towers look like skeletal remains against the orange glow of the river. I was struck by how the water acted like a mirror, doubling the intensity of that horizon. The sensor grabbed a lot more pink than my eyes actually registered in the moment.

Shocking what a HTC phone camera could do at the time, or was it the right moment in time?


Shot data:

CameraHTC-ST7377 HTC-ST7377
Focal Length5mm
Aperturef/2.5
Shutter Speed1/21s
ISO175
Date Taken2011-01-04

🎩 Gerry O'Hooligan — Art Critic

The way those industrial towers puncture the horizon creates a haunting, skeletal geometry that perfectly captures that "ruin" aesthetic you were chasing. The water provides a delicious symmetry, effectively doubling the weight of the colors and grounding the image in a mirrored plane. However, that heavy, dark mass of the foreground railing is eating into the frame’s energy, distracting from the delicacy of the river’s surface. Since you're using an action cam, try to hold the camera slightly higher or lean into the railing to crop out those foreground bars entirely, letting the water meet the bottom edge of the frame. Next time, try to find a vantage point where that lower railing disappears into the shadows, leaving only the skeletal towers and the mirror of the water to tell the story.

— Gerry O'Hooligan