Blue Scale and Frozen Peaks
That deep cobalt sky almost feels like it's heavy enough to crush the ridge. I was struck by how the mountain's jagged textures look like static again…
That deep cobalt sky almost feels like it's heavy enough to crush the ridge. I was struck by how the mountain's jagged textures look like static against such a clean, saturated blue. My phone sensor handled the contrast well, but I'm still wondering if the blue was actually this intense or if the screen just cranked it up.
Shot data:
| Camera | asus Nexus 7 |
| Focal Length | 3mm |
| Aperture | f/0.0 |
| ISO | 106 |
| Date Taken | 2015-02-28 |
| Location | Mount Hood Parkdale, Oregon |
🎩 Gerry O'Hooligan — Art Critic
The way you’ve sequestered the mountain into the bottom fifth of the frame creates a crushing, atmospheric weight that perfectly mirrors your intention of the sky's "heaviness." The jagged, static-like textures of the ridge provide a sharp, tactile grit that stands in delicious opposition to the velvet smoothness of that cobalt expanse. However, the bottom right corner suffers from a distracting, muddy shadow that feels like a smudge on a pristine lens, pulling the eye away from your peak. Since you're working with a mobile sensor, try using the "Exposure Slider" on your screen to slightly underexpose the snow; this will prevent the whites from blowing out and allow those subtle, jagged textures to pop even more. Next time, try to find a foreground element—perhaps a single gnarled branch or a rock—to give that heavy sky something to actually lean against.
— Gerry O'Hooligan